All Comments on 'The Paint Surprise'

Well, it requires an absolutely immense suspension of disbelief that a friend would send someone out like this without providing a safety net (I guess she wasn't a very good friend after all). Hell, the MC even comments how lucky she was. And the beginning was very disjointed with the rest. So I can't call it a really good story. I'd give it an okay story.

A sexy, confident woman overcoming her fears with a dash of humor and the hint of more at the end. What's not to like? 5 stars.

Once again, you have written something that made me smile many times over. Excellent work!

Fun story.

That was fun!

good story.

Room for improvement = think the information about her work life could have been condensed a bit - but a competent story and a pleasant read.

Fun tale. Good luck in the contest.

fun story. hope she gets a chance to belt tony over the head with the briefcase, after the nice dinner date with anton