All Comments on 'The Palace of Pleasure'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

very unusual, but brought me in. Reminds me of an old Dennis Hopper movie called Night Tide, just in terms of the atmosphere.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I found this quite enjoyable. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is just a beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved it, but it needs another chapter, or at least an epilog. I got caught up in the story and need to know what happens after they leave the palace

rvagirlrvagirlalmost 2 years ago

Those dark, lonely nights searching for some kind of wonder to make you feel whole. I know those nights. I’m know that music Jacky hears so well.

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If you happen to be reading this, hello! My name is Joshana and I've been working on a series called Finding the Perfect Fit for the past few months. It is my first time sharing my writing with the wider world and especially with the topics of gender and identity. If you've be...