All Comments on 'The Palmer Legacy Pt. 10'

Getting weirder by the story. All the characters are distracting from the plot. Hard to follow.

I really wish you'd stop doing just 2 pages it can get reeeaaallly frustrating!!

Just confusing. Pacing with your 2 pages each time doesn't work

Chapters 1 - 40 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

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Uummm....I came reading for Palmer Mansion.

So far...'nuff said

Very well written but lacks the passion and erotic nature on the Palmer Mansion which is one of my all time favorite stories on the site. I agree with the other comments that two pages does not work with so many characters. Thank you and please keep writing.

I'm confused. If this is a 40 part series including the finale then why does the heading say this is only a 10 part series? If this is a 40 part series then label it a 40 part series. Please stop with the deceit.

Been over a month, when does chapter 11 drop??

The excitement multiplies