All Comments on 'The Pampered Princess Chronicles'

Good one, nice contrast in the threads.

Congratulation. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Three stories of three different marriages from each other (cuckold marriage, marriage with infidelity, and a love marriage) in one story.

In the end, everyone finds the respect and life they wanted.

“Once upon a time…..” you think Disney would option the movie rights? Three princesses? That’s just too juicy to turn down. I’m guessing with their army of writers, they might actually pull it off! ‘Pampered Princess’ was an entertaining and enjoyable fable. Thanks much.

What a strange angle - what a great story!

An interesting story to make a point about self-absorbed princesses. Unfortunately, the errors throughout the story gave the impression of a hastily dashed off tale. A bit more care and/or careful editing would have helped a lot. This talented author has certainly produced better stories, so I’ll patiently await the next offering.

Terrible plot.

Good story. .333 is a good batting average, for baseball. D

Turned out better than I had anticipated. Many thanks for the story. At the beginning I was concerned because you clearly didn't understand how Trusts work and some of your info was just... wrong. However, you recovered with the statement by Beth that she had already inherited the funds (should have had a "Contracting Out" agreement, what the US call a Pre-Nup).

Rob and Stephanie were just wrong! How any man would put up with her blatant public cheating and the way she treated her husband privately, is unbelievable. Or, at heart, he was basically a weak and pathetic cuck.

Anyway, it all ended well, so thanks again. Cheers.

It was a bit obvious Steve & Elizabeth were going to work out as happily ever after. Other than that, enjoyable story.

Couldn't give it full marks due to too many instances of incorrect words being used that really detracted from the flow of the story.

Your dialogue, especially amongst several people, is both inspired writing, and it's easy to follow who is speaking! Moreover, I think 4 parts, much less 4 pages, might be barely adequate to do this fine tale of justice, adequate justice! Flesh it out, expand your scenes, and the sky's the limit, here. One of the best and most skillfully written concepts on this site in quite a while! You never disappoint. 5+++/5!!

Wow! @miket0422's comments are typical of LW's hard core/corps: <<It was a bit obvious Steve & Elizabeth were going to work out as happily ever after. Other than that, enjoyable story.>>

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Apparently wanted all three marriages to fail. I mean, seriously...

Superb, superb, superb! Easily a 5 from QuickMagazine! Loved the 3 parallel stories, and although I didn't find Steve & Elizabeth succeeding to be the fait accompli miket0422 saw it as, I was rooting for them. Rob's pre-marital acceptance of Stephanie's likely cheating reminds me a small bit of how the MMC groom accepted the nude stockings in "Nude Stockings." Satindesires has been on a roll lately, what with not only "Nude Stockings," but also, in fact even more so, "Suburban Wife." As for this story, demander is right about the success rate. Or, to paraphrase the late Meat Loaf who was referenced here through another song, "One Out Of Three Ain't Bad."

Demander has it right -- Baseball and Women are the only places where batting a career .300 will get you into the hall of fame. I liked the story, not a 5, but a solid 4. It was fun, it was obvious ... but the 2 divorced guys should have gotten pre-nups from the wives detailing the open marriages and how it would pay them if the wives went beyond the pale.

I recognize the ending… but… it feels as though their should be… more?!?! Still, very good writing and a very much enjoyable read. Thank-you

Enjoyed this story of pampered princesses. 5 stars.

Well. I'm not exactly sure how I feel about this one except I'm definitely entertained.

Thank you.

A very entertaining story told. I liked that very much. Thanks for the good work!

Excellent and very entertaining tale. I agree with LPN completely. Well done, thank you.

Just another cuck story.

3 stars and only because the worst SLUTs were chucked to the curb and divorced.

None of the characters were even remotely likeable.

The story seemed to be lacking any sort of feelings and just rattled on and on about so much drivel.

Not what I was expecting from satindesires. I had to give it only 3-stars. Felt like the author was not really into the story. I guess it's like baseball, sometimes you hit a double, sometimes you get really lucky and hit one out of the park and sometimes, well, you get three strikes and no balls. Keep swinging, I'm sure it's just a slump and maybe you'll hit the next one out of the park with the bases loaded.

A bit different from the usual story here and rather well done. I gave it five stars for its entertainment value alone.

As promised, you delivered a fun read. While the story had good length, I really felt shorted not getting more depth on Steve and Beth. It would be pretty easy to rewrite that story in a way it would fall into the "Romance" genre. Decent effort overall! 4*

I'll go with a fun read, didnt feel like a waste of time, though I do agree there it felt like there should have been a little more at the end.

I wasn't sure how I'd like this, as you come up short often, but I'm glad I didnt just skip over it.

Well done, found the story interesting and entertaining.

Tags didn’t look good, but it turned out to be a really good story. Enjoyed it.

I agree with the positive comments. Nice story, interesting characters.

On a technical note, I find some of the grammatical and punctuation errors distracting. They sometimes require some puzzling to get through. A bit of editing would really polish the story. Thanks for the nice work.

Was waiting to be disappointed, but found it quite good. Interesting and entertaining.

Good story! Those type of women make me want to run away.

4

Pretty ordinary. Author combined 3 frequent LW plot lines into one story. It felt though the author bailed out too quickly, but overall a decent read, especially given the drivel that is taking over the site

I enjoyed this story, the two sluts were impossible. Just way too entitled, products of their parental upbringing. Their lives are ruined.

4/5

No, l’ve revised my score, this is a good tale, told in a grand style

Now 5/5

A lot of fun!

Very entertaining 👏.

The characters, even the unpleasant ones could be used in a sequel. The changes, emotional development, would make a Chapter Two an exciting continuation.

Gave you 4⭐️'s. Thanks satindesires 😃.

Looking forward to your next story. I'm

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Not bad, but it defies human nature. No real decent ethical person could stand being in the company of arrogant selfish whores like Victoria and Stephanie. So the virtuous and loyal Elizabeth being or remaining friends with these monstrous skanks is absurd. As to the two cucks who agreed to be cucks; what were they complaining about? They expected their cuckoldry to be tolerable, non humiliating, temporary? Yeah, those two dumb shits got what they married, so they got what they deserved. Thanks for the effort.

Really enjoyed this princess tale!

A sweet story nicely told. Thank you.

Nice story line, good writing. Beth and Steve from the beginning you new she loved him and would not cheat. Stephanie has mental issues and is on a course of self destruction. Victoria could have been forgiving and a stronger Steve could have made her right. Got her pregnant & less self centered with marriage counseling. Otherwise a good story. .

Nice.

Good story! 5*

I enjoyed this, nothing to deep, and heavy, you put a couple of BTBs, and an RAAC all in one story. I liked how you told all three stories as they were all evolving at the same time, Dating, wedding, divorce. Good job of giving us something a little different, it impresses me when a writer thinks outside of the box.

Thank you. KS

Hey, QuickMagazine again here. Already commented a few days ago, but this story has really stuck to my ribs. Think it may be satindesire's best yet, and considering "Suburban Wife," that's saying a mouthful. Anyway, the extra comment I wanted to make was that Elizabeth in this story reminded me a bit of Trisha in BlueGee's classic "The Grass Isn't Always Greener." Just as Elizabeth comments early in this story that Stephanie's plan is wrong, so did Trisha raise objections at every turn to Hope's plans in "The Grass." Both were right, and got the guy.

Great story. 3 in one stories. Very well done. 5stars

Nice, although it might have been entertaining to read the first draft of he chronicles. They’d have plenty of verifiable evidence, given the women’s media exposure.

Why not write the Steve Elizabeth story as a separate one. There is hardly any connection of one to the other.

Well written though.

4/5

Good and slightly cynical fun!

The Elizabeth and Steve story was really well done. The other two were predictable and the Stephanie and Rob story was surreal. Would have liked to see more of Elizabeth and Steve.

This one was kind of unique - 2 LW tracks and one romance, in one story. Nicely done!

Very nicely done! Beth proves to be a great counterpoint to her friends. Five stars all the way!

Interesting, well-characterized, and well-constructed, although that sounds a tad dry...

I recommend this excellent story

Creative. Good story. Stephanie was a tyrant skank. Victoria was selfish and delusional and paid the price. Elizabeth was deceitful but for a good cause. She more than earned the 50 year extension. Good stuff!

Enjoyable story,some thing slightly different to the norm.

I loved the Elizabeth and Steve romance. She knew he'd never marry her or trust her, and rightfully. so, she betrayed him. But she truly loved him, so she put her plan into motion. I don't think it was deceitful, I think it was more romantic. She was faithful and proved her love. Steve also became aware of his actual feelings for her due to his lack of interest in other girls.

When you sacrifice personality for beauty you will always get burned. A lot of red flags were there before marriage. How stupid can a person can be?