All Comments on 'The Panty Raider'

by ValoryG

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ended quick

Was not a fan of the ending. You gave great details throughout the story but then rushed the ending. Would liked to have had more details of the final relationship

300bowler300300bowler300over 5 years ago
SAME HERE

WISH THE ENDING WASN'T SO RUSHED...BESIDES THAT, A REALLY GREAT STORY FOR SURE...MAYBE ANOTHER CHAPTER...? BETTY jo xoxo

VickieTernVickieTernover 5 years ago
The two comments so far, too true.

The ending might have extended itself into his submission to his new masculine woman lover, who could be testing her control over him not only by pairing him with cute chicks but by pairing his feminine self with some real men of the kind she also cultivates. So in the end, his panty collection gets worn and destroyed by accumulated semen, his own and others men's. For instance.

But as far as you've written, splendid!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

loved it another chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh My....YES!!!

Ms ValoryG, this was delightful story for this long-time Pantiboi. I usually buy Christine's pretty panties and other luscious lingerie (luv a lacy bra), but on occasion have "borrowed" a girlfriends pair. Thx for sharing your tale.

SissyCrissy6245.........xoxoxo

ValoryGValoryGover 4 years agoAuthor
I agree

Yes, some of my endings are rushed. I have begun writing only short stories, because I'm involved with writing a large, commercial non-fiction book that requires a lot of time. And then after that, a cookbook that will also take a lot of time (and will probably result in me getting fat!). So, forgive me.

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