All Comments on 'The Papergirl'

It's bad enough that this author gets off thinking about drugging and raping two mentally disabled girls without all the mean comments on how stupid they are. Guy probably likes to pull the wings off flies andtorture puppies and kittens too. Stick to masturbation - you obviously don't relate well to humans.

OK, but really, why the overkill? When they get home drunk and stoned then tell their parents who call the police, you're looking at being Bubba's girl for 5-10.

Rape is rape, all you avoided was the underage stuff.

"Looking for ideas for stories. Send me your ideas for stories. I might use them."

I don't know where you got the idea for this story,but I gotta tell you that you are very sick,you are really making a mockery of this great adult site. If this is the way you really operate in your real life I suggest that you seek help before you end up in bar city where they would really know how to treat a pervert such as yourself. Rating from me is -100

What a totally lame story. The protagonist is a total asshole and the girls are totally stupid. This story is the one of the most unbelievable on this site. Author, what did you do with the money your mother gave you for writer's school?

agree 100% with Anonymous in Toledo

Frankly, it doesn't even deserve a 00 or a 1. Your story is that bad.

Cool stuff man. No heavy duty nonconsent, this was like consent al the way..... I like the indian girl stuff.. Two on one... Make the third part now.

Quite good but why stop? If he's a one shot wonder, pass them over here.

...and drugging and assaulting two gullible women is one of the sickest thing there is. Does this stuff stimulate you? Do you really think in the obscene words of your protagonist? You need help, man, serious help.

For now, go elsewhere. You're a creep. Your "story" is crap.

keep writing it was hot fantasy.

That's just about it. How ridiculous, uninventive and badly written

This was pretty annoying to read, the tone of the guy was ...quite ugly. Jerk of a dude. It made me want less and less for anything good to happen to him.

Badly written.