All Comments on 'The Park'

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63lsmith63lsmithalmost 8 years ago
I LIKED IT

But it was way to short. Please write another chapter that is longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
editing

good story content but poorly edited for grammatical errors

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it.

I experienced the same thing, great gay sex.

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