All Comments on 'The Parson's Wife'

Very very good can't wait for chapter two!!!!!!!!!!

except for jerry being there, other than that it was pretty good

Jerry and Amy certainly bring a whole new meaning to the expression 'missionary position'. The story (chapter?) was well written but if you're going to bring Jerry into the sex scenes you might care to consider a category other than Lesbian Sex.

Thank you for your comment. I've reread the story and it still, to me, is a lesbian romance with supporting cast. This is the first of a number of planned stories in a series and Jerry will get his day, not in the lesbian pages. I'm curious, though, in which category would you have posted it?

FWIW, I have many lesbian friends, most of whom are very sensible women who like men as people, but are simply not attracted to them sexually. That does not detract from their being lesbian in any way.

Well well, wasn't that sexy? Yes it was. I'm looking forward to more chapters no matter what category it comes in.

I take it your reply was to my earlier comment. I did say "if" you were going to bring Jerry into sex scenes, then a different category might be appropriate. I've been writing and reading on this site for a number of years now and I've seen a lot of disgruntled comments when men have been brought into the lesbian sex scenes---I was simply trying to help you avoid such comments. So if sex is between Barb and Tammy only, Lesbian Sex is the right place. If you bring Jerry into the sex there is a category called Erotic Couplings which is probably more suitable. By the way, when I first read this story I gave you five stars so it wasn't all bad news.

Sorry, I had a senior moment there. I meant Barb and Amy. Mea culpa!

A really enjoyed this story, but... did I miss something: she was supposed to spend the weekend, but in the end, he drove her home when he came back to what seems the same night! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Very nice story, very erotic and stimulating...hope you will continue the story!

There's a nice feeling of straightforward innocence here, and the churchy tone is good. But:

- the pastor's wife gets naked for the bath, and Barb doesn't seem to look at her body, and doesn't tell us how pretty it is? A missed opportunity

- the story seems to be going somewhere, but doesn't.