by tghlawyer03
...in the hopes that your fully written tales begins to fulfill its promise with the next installment. Hopefully the outlandish setup is the only suspension of disbelief required.
I am amazed that the readers don't understand the art of presentation....patience, my readers, the story will unfold as I wish it to....and it's all written, by the way....I just don't want to present it all at once....
Is that it? Just drop the story like that? You submit a story about a guy answering an ad in a magazine. Why not wait until you write the rest of the story before wasting anyones time. This had the makings of a good story but you really dropped the ball.