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by BigandTall1324

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The Language is important

The story, although a bit fanciful, was hard to follow due to all the mistakes in grammar, punctuation and tense. You need a proofreader or a higher quality word processor.

-=-Shoreguy

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