All Comments on 'The Party: Fast Learner Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great story and good pacing! Next chapter should have him reviewing this lesson, maybe choke her out before teaching her how to fuck.

tcmnylonstcmnylonsabout 6 years ago
Well done

good buildup, sexy

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I'm just an average guy interested in giving writing erotic fiction a try. I'm a big fan of stories focused around noncon and reluctance, and my primary area of interest is deepthroat and rough oral sex. My plan is for most of my stories occur in the same universe, each bein...