All Comments on 'The Party Guest Pt. 06 - BF POV'

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WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

Stupid story about a cuckold fool

Scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really like the wri

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really liking your plotting/writing, but even IRL this guy would be out as a cuck or sub at this point. Andy aught to openly submit to Maya the start of next chapter.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

0 star - stupid cuck/wimp crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Are you going to continue this hot story? Please do!

brazilianguy1brazilianguy1over 2 years ago

I Hope you keep going

sjjazzsjjazzabout 2 years ago

The suspense has long since drained out of this plot. I don’t care about any of the three principal characters. In fact I have unbounded contempt for all of them. Maya continuing to have a relationship with Andy is completely implausible. Why would she waste her time with him if he leaves her so unfulfilled. What does it say about her that she just strings him along?

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