All Comments on 'The Passion Re-Awakens'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
To Annon

Why do you keep reading these stories? If you don't like them why waste your time? Just so you can bitch is my guess.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Your writing is awful.

So many mistakes. And if she grabs his balls he's gonna swing a fist and knock her out cold. If you don't think so you know nothing of actually fighting. What you described simply doesn't happen from a physical point of view. Oh - and treat him like that and he divorces her for sure. This was poorly conceived and badly done.

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