All Comments on 'The Pasture in Space - Revolution'

enjoyed it a lot!!

This whole story kept developing and stayed enticing to the end. A very fine piece of... descriptive storytelling.

Five stars secondsamuel

You've created an entire world. The sexy parts were sexy, and i enjoyed them quite a bit, but the story was even more captivating and i enjoyed it quite a bit. you should be very proud of what you did here.

I love being able to read these massive stories on occasions. Some stories don't lend themselves as well to an episodic nature as others, and this I would consider one of them. The story itself is great, but when fragmented it may have been more difficult to wait for each chapter to finally give the closure it ends on. The mentally rough stuff has always been a sour note for me when I read a story. The worldbuilding made sense with it though, so I can understand that it can make sense with that context, and I was intrigued by how it would be resolved. When we finally meet Tara and Thonon and their plot I knew that reading this one was a good idea.

I can't recall if it had been mentioned in the story, but I am a bit curious as to how old Antonella is, and how long Thonon had to teach him. Though I suppose time may not mean the same thing to them. I ponder only because I wonder if a calm and amenable consensus has been reached. Because one way or another your worlds are sure to meet each other again, and I hope for the best. Tara's people seem the best we could hope for, and I expect them to be better than Castillo's folk.

A bit late I'm sure, but I thank you for writing such an impressive story and sharing it here. Hope you and yours are well.