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kurmuginkurmuginover 4 years ago
A beautiful, poignant description of life's path.

You're absolutely right. There are always people that love to throw rocks. They don't care where they land or who they hit. Too bad the young lady couldn't see what was being offered.

johnpassionjohnpassionover 4 years agoAuthor
@kurmugin Thank you

Thank you for commenting. I have heard too many times that stumbling and getting hurt is a part of life. I do not agree. There will be hurts. There will be struggles. But if there is a chance that someone will be by you on the same path to help, I believe if we should accept that help. Too often people give up too quickly. Just my opinion of course.

Thank you once again for commenting and for reading my writing.

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful

This is a very lovely story

johnpassionjohnpassionover 4 years agoAuthor
@anonymous on 11/5

Thank you very much.

melimelissamelimelissaover 4 years ago
lovely parable

You write good prose and poetry - very talented

johnpassionjohnpassionover 4 years agoAuthor
@melimelissa

Thank you. I appreciate that you read and comment on my offerings. Thank you so much!

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