All Comments on 'The Path Less Traveled'

by KaneSubotai

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wwaldripwwaldrip4 months ago

Great story loved reading it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice, but you could have gone into a little more details building up to the first (happy) ending

Worshipper622chichiWorshipper622chichi4 months ago

Storyline is ok at best. Rush to finish makes it less so.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

End seemed a bit rushed and story could have been a bit longer, but was a good read

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

More

More

Please

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Lucky Guy, great one, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Could've gone on a bit longer maybe a few more pages like you got Carla pregnant etc

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