- Loving Wives
- The Payoff
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All Comments on 'The Payoff'
by naughtygurl30
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 19 years agoIt was a very well writin story and maybe part two, if there is one, will be a little hotter. But the story was just missing somthing. But I did like it
Anonymousover 19 years ago"St. Croix let her legs fall across his shoulders and he dove into her throbbing vagina using his tong to push her outer lips out of the way and began eating her in earnest. It only took a few minutes until she began a series of high pitched moaned and her hips began to grind frenetically into his face."
Ok, what the hell is a tong? And Moaned....that's called PAST tense, not present, in which you should be.
BTW, this is an overly used idea, think of something original for your next (hopefully not) story.
Anonymousover 19 years agoGood story - maybe should have made the seduction a little longer though. I will definitely be reading the next part - if there is one.
Cumbabyover 19 years agoWhite wife gets first taste of Blacksnake.
How can you go wrong?
Well written, don't pay any attention to the nit pickers.
shooter3704over 19 years agoIs chapter two going be be like the rest of matter of interest? Write your own shit!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI once fucked a black lady who told me that most of the stories about big cocks and great endurance of black men was a story. She told me she had fucked enough different men of color and otherwise that she concluded that men and women were all different in their talents. She concluded as she looked down at my white cock sliding in and out of her beautiful black cunt that the color contrast was one big reason for the fantasy.
I agreed but I still enjoyed your story, thanks.
bigger25almost 19 years agoit s great. but u must write more about their fuckin and ofcourse her silly hubby's behaviour.
its up to u even. u may want us to fdantasize...............
Anonymousabout 3 years agoone more whore, that married a fool. Should be able to find her working a corner in about a week. Like the old saying goes. Once you go black you never go back. Unfortunately they always leave of the second line which makes the first the only option. The second line......because you are not wantedback.
