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OffNSFWOffNSFWabout 2 years agoAuthor

Hi all! I normally don't interact in the comments on my stories. (I think it's important to just let people have their say.) But since there's no other place to mark it as such, this story is an entry in the Literotica 750 Word Project. Thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

five stars, for the atmosphere and setting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well done! I felt the tension of the short form in a good way. Mm the fingering call back, also good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

For being such a short story, the imagery was incredible. My breath hitched in my chest when I thought she was drowning. I need to go and read more of your work.

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40 something | he/him | bi Thanks for reading, rating, commenting, and favoriting! I generally don't reply to feedback in the Literotica comments, but I do read all of them. Be nice!