All Comments on 'The Pecking Order'

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bkdarkcambkdarkcamover 15 years ago
Great Stuff

I love your stories. Kick ass and good shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great!

Just great! More of that! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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Oh. My. God. This is one of the best stories I have ever read!! I love... well, not gonna write that cause it's kind of.... personal, but let's just say that I really LOVED it... Thanks. You're an awesome writer! =) **P

scott72scott72over 12 years ago
PECKING ORDER 2

HAVE IN THIS STORY ANGELINA LOVE & VELVET SKY DOMINATING A NEW KNOCKOUT MELINA. BRING BETH PHOENIX IN THE STORY WITH HER GIRFRIEND KELLY KELLY. AND WHO'S PUSSY HAD KAREN ANGLE ATE BEFORE THE BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE?

scott72scott72about 12 years ago
NEW PECKING ORDER............

HAVE MICKIE & VELVET FORM ALLIANCE TO DOMINATE A FUCKING WITH ANGELINA LOVE/ MADISON RAYNE..........THAT WOULD BE REALLY HOT.........

scott72scott72over 11 years ago
Pecking Order 2 Angelina/Velvet /Madison

Just a wish, that this could totally happen. Basically how Angelina & Velvet brought Madison into the Beautiful People would have been great !! I guess any thing is possible with some creative thinking. Oh, well still a great story written !!

scott72scott72over 11 years ago
Angelina Love & Velvet Sky Pecking Order MICKIE JAMES

This could really make an AWESOME story of the BP making Mickie James following their orders. By the BP making Mickie being their BITCH and doing whatever they WANT her to do. Plus BP having to get the honor of FUCKING some Mickie James ASS !

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