All Comments on 'The Peep Hole Ch. 02'

by wankRus

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TibxoTibxoalmost 17 years ago
Good second chapter.

I really liked it.

Now looking forward to your third.

AhabscribeAhabscribealmost 17 years ago
A wonderful beginning!

I loved this...very realistic and tenderly romantic. I can't wait until the next!

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 17 years ago
Intense and captivating

I kind of fell upon this one but I was surprised by the quality and the intensity. The ending was surprising too. Not a standard stroke story. Will there be another chapter? It could end here, but it would be nice to read more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
crappy

should have been in the fetish or nonconsensual area

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
rushed

way to rushed as if either of them would forgive the other that fast. maybe in months or years not over night slow down and make it believable. not worth the time it took to read or the space to print it.

DBRS

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