by wankRus
Great story. lots of detail and intimacy. Good visualization.
Write more.
A good erotica. Please continue. Introduce some elements of BDSM and dominance of mother in the next part of the story to further enhance its erotic content.
It is hard to explain how sexy, active, and demanding mature women are, particularly if they have taken care of themselves. Saggy breasts do not mean that they are less sensitive, sensual, and cause positive reaction. Nipples excite at amazing speed. And there is incredible pleasure being able to suck lots of that wonderful breast flesh into ones mouth and stretch it. A mature woman is very much an ideal and incredible lover.
Keep writing and expanding. You will certainly increase your audience.