All Comments on 'The Penalty'

Nicely done!

Decent story, but I'm pretty sure any guy thrown into that decision would be thinking fight or flight and panic, not sitting around with the last victim getting high.

As much as I love being the slut I can be, I have to say this. These guys would have to worry about going to sleep

Immediately my new favorite story on literotica

Literally one of the all-time greats

This was...unparalleled

Not just the development, not just the story, not just the inner-workings of the mind

It was this line that showed me you are the top writer: "high points on a tide of submissive oblivion"

This story deserves a sequel...nay an entire series! a whole book!

please continue this!!!!! i beg of you!!!

I love the premise. I also enjoyed https://www.literotica.com/s/the-punishment-40

A great story showing personalities that are like fire and water, like two different shores... from an ordinary boy to submission and passing as a servant to becoming a sissy used by a dozen or so men. You wonderfully showed mentality, emotions and, to a large extent, mental and physical dependence on dominant people. I like Chris/Chrissy very much and I even got close to him and I would like to become a sissy like him/her. I hope you will write more about Chris/Chrissy and what happened to her/him? How did he/she serve Jeremy and what sexual experiences did he/she experience?

ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English.

Best regards, SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 🧒🏻⚧️👧🏻❤️👱🏻‍♂️🧑🏻💦👅🥛🍦🍼💋💦👨🏻🧑🏻👨🏻‍🦱

A very interesting story. I couldn't have been in it but it's an interesting story. And I definitely couldn't have been so blase about the whole situation at the end. Maybe it's the fact that I spend way too much money on fantasy football to allow something like that to slide. Maybe it's The minute they rig the game for me to lose I don't care how big they are they'd caught my hands. Or they each would have mysteriously been attacked and kneecapped in the following weeks. But good story very well written