All Comments on 'The Perfect Storm Ch. 02'

by randallangdon

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ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 11 years ago
And then.....

Don't stop now!

What a tease.....

There's about six ways his could go, all of them fun

Great, natural story-telling with a powerful and realistic theme. Keep it coming ( or should that be cuming?).

ramonbrookramonbrookover 9 years ago
Loved the story ... But

I think the part where he actually started sucking her toes and making love should have been longer. It all happened too fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I loved it: 5*****

Thank you. tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
To bad we can't say thanks for no comments asshole annnoy

I gave this a 5 for effort and content and to help offset the asshole of Lit's comment

tobytimtobytimabout 4 years ago
Hot

Loved it,, definitely needs more, so unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't find a reason to comment on an 8 year old story that never was finished. Sorry.

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