All Comments on 'The Perfect Storm Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't find a reason to comment on an 8 year old story that never was finished. Sorry.

XYZ

tobytimtobytimabout 4 years ago
Hot

Loved it,, definitely needs more, so unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
To bad we can't say thanks for no comments asshole annnoy

I gave this a 5 for effort and content and to help offset the asshole of Lit's comment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I loved it: 5*****

Thank you. tom anon

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 10 years ago
Loved the story ... But

I think the part where he actually started sucking her toes and making love should have been longer. It all happened too fast.

ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 11 years ago
And then.....

Don't stop now!

What a tease.....

There's about six ways his could go, all of them fun

Great, natural story-telling with a powerful and realistic theme. Keep it coming ( or should that be cuming?).

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