All Comments on 'The Performance'

Can't wait for part 2 and beyond!

I was told once, about fifty years ago while I was in France - Nude and Naked both indicate a lack of clothing. Naked, I was told, is getting nude with the intent of being NAUGHTY! Another Chapter, please!

You must be the only semi-literate assistant professor in existence.

"my labia, maybe my pussy lips"

"labia" are pussy lips, you idiot. Learn some basic anatomy.

Many other mistakes, but this one stands out.

Hey Kaf, slow your roll, or whatever the current buzzphrase is. Chill out. Be cool. You need to take a chill pill. You have precisely one submission, back in '01. HStoner has a couple three dozen.

Before you get all holier than thou? Take into account the context: that was the character speaking, and she was nervous, and she repeated herself. Good characterization, in my book.

Maybe when you have something remotely resembling the number or submissions HStoner has, you'll have a bit more cred. 'Til then... yeah. Hush.

HStoner? Good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm liking this. I'm liking where it's going.

I think your creativity on the story line is great, and completely believable. Reads like a classy novel with interesting characters and a slight undertow of repressed sexuality. I'll be looking for the following chapters.

note to kaf;

In the 60s and 70s, unless one studied Latin or Medicine, the word 'Labia' was never heard or spoken and almost never read. Today, it is much more widely used but, still, a great many people are unfamiliar with it, most likely even some of Penny's audience.

Get off your high horse. You look like a fool up there.

Got me excited. I would love to see a show like this in person. Please keep subsequent chapters coming. This story is too good to waste with only 1 chapter.

5*. More if I could.

Great story - I feel somewhat abandoned - Please finish this story to a conclusion.

Great story. Looking forward to part 2.

Loved the candid tone. Good characters, good premise. Would love to see you continue the series.

Enjoyed Reading it, looking forward to next installment ;)

Please! Let's learn about them in New York. You have an amazing way with your characters. It all seems real and there is no "yeah, right," reaction. Experiential for sure. Thank you.

Not what I expected, keep it going.

A penny for my thoughts.

Yes a good and very brave performance

Loved it! Take it on tour around the country.

I can relate to Penny and her performance. A serious, yet fun aim.

lololol,,i wasn't expecting that ending!! well done.