All Comments on 'The Performance Ch. 02'

by HStoner

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Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69almost 5 years ago
what a great story

Of how two women enjoy one man. I sure hope there will be more chapters as this is almost every man's dream, it sure is mine!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Performance 3

Excellent! Cant wait to see Performance 3 arrive

LeBaron1987LeBaron1987almost 5 years ago
Please

Please more. I love these characters, and I love the scenario.

john1946john1946almost 5 years ago
Wonderful

This actually topped the first Performance. What a great idea, and adding the love interest and her stuff just made it more so. I'll hope for and look forward to a part 3.

Ought to be great. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Page 4

Great. I wish you had expanded the last paragraph into page 4. I wanted to hear all about it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

So the first time with Penny you tell us about it happening? Lazy and disappointing you only get two stars for fucking up a good story right at the end too.

olblueyesolblueyes29 days ago

oh my word!!! your story lines are well crafted and written,,build ups are nice, but you cannot write sex scenes at all!! one scene you skipped all together, helen and jim asked megan and harry to sleep with them and then nothing!!! also no oral sex, no anal sex, no rimming, just in and out and done,,,and so am i,,not erotic at all.

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