All Comments on 'The Perils of Nursing in Africa'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You started off well and could have drawn out the issue with the mother and really made it eroctic but you kicked it into overdrive and finished in under 3 minutes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
loved this

love this story, i hope there is a part 2,3,and 4. it was great, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

Suggestion to spice up story ia letting into room african woman about Hannah age who dominates both mother and daughter into willing submissives serving black studs while taking over hospital they established. More white nurses can be imported for submissive roles after training black nurses in doing their jobs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Makes my pussy so wet

I stroked my wet pussy as I read this story. Thank you for turning me on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Grammar?

To many grammar errors for me. Good idea. Bad sentence structure and bad grammar.

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An expat living in Finland. I write about things that I would never actually want to do to anyone. I enjoy them as fantasies, but nothing more. Hopefully they are read in the same way. My work does centre around non-consensual sex - especially the earlier stories - so if that...