by Shaima32
Another believable slice of life, Shaima, with the usual interesting and varied cast of characters (it's even easy to visualise those who are mentioned in passing like Stephen). I had to smile at your description of Sam: Elvis Presley to Danny de Vito. It's like one of those old adverts---"How to change yourself in ten easy lessons". So what's in store for Part 05?
5 Stars as usual. Your stories never disappoint. I always look forward to your postings.
SBab
5 stars as always, but North Melbourne Bombers? Lucky Im a Crows fan, but you may have upset a few NM Kangaroos or Essendon Bomber fans ;)
Oh how i wished i lived in that little part of Australia where there seems to be a bendable lady round each corner.
Seriously, you write in such away that i am drawn into the story and lives of your characters . Brilliantly written with a sexy bedroom scene .
Carnt wait to see what Paula gets up to next.
Thank you
JC