All Comments on 'The Phone Call'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
For a first attempt....

....she was pretty damn good at it. That's the kind of messages my last GF and I would text each other late at night when we weren't together. Thanks for the memories! Hot!

jimmcdonald609jimmcdonald609almost 7 years ago
Phone fun

A bit of a different take on phone fun, but very good.

More description and emotion would have gone a long way.

Over the years the gift of the gab has given me some very pleasant memories.

HeyFor4HeyFor4over 6 years ago
Very Nice :)

I hope we get to see and read the rest of the larger story this is part of. I like this a lot :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great short story- very erotic. Good writing and narration

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