All Comments on 'The Photo Shoot'

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18rabbit18rabbit4 months ago

Really loved this one. I hope your plan is to add more- so many directions, like did anything get left on his computer? Where did Emily live? Who is Nicole sending photos to? Looking forward to the next installment...

Rambling_ChantrixRambling_Chantrix4 months ago

Nicole's interest in / joint ownership of Emily really made this one for me. Thank you for sharing <3

morning31_bmorning31_b4 months ago

Love it .... so horny

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very hot

LongTimer2LongTimer24 months ago

This was great. Hope this is not over. There could be so much happening here. Loved your take on the story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A great tease, just like all three of the main characters.

jrydher1jrydher14 months ago

There needs to be a sequel. 5 stars.

nakedwonder50nakedwonder504 months ago

Loved this. It hit a lot of my buttons. Hope there’s a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Really nice.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Original and well done loved the building up of the story looking forward to more

TheJoker33TheJoker334 months ago

This story definitely deserves at least a sequel.

WriterPerson314159WriterPerson3141594 months ago

Nice and hot. :)

I’d read more if you wanted to write more.

DanOSteelDanOSteel4 months ago

Very nicely done. As others have already said this one needs another chapter or two!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

sequel Please

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hot!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Clever premise.

Decent buildup.

But the masturbation was too straightforward. Needed more dialog. What was he thinking about while he jerked off? Could he do it slower? Can he imagine titty fucking her? If so, would he like it if she took his cock into her mouth?

Four stars.

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spalding3 months ago

Wow.

Slice of life in the 90s.

Loved it!

JodailyJodaily2 months ago

Ok, so that was really really fucking hot!!! If your intent was to make all of your readers masturbate and cum you have succeeded admirably. I doubt there's a dry hand in the house. 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦. Can't wait for part two. Hoping my cock will recover from this abuse. I have a feeling that's a strong yes! Thank you. Felt SO good!

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