by samhasstories
Really loved this one. I hope your plan is to add more- so many directions, like did anything get left on his computer? Where did Emily live? Who is Nicole sending photos to? Looking forward to the next installment...
Nicole's interest in / joint ownership of Emily really made this one for me. Thank you for sharing <3
This was great. Hope this is not over. There could be so much happening here. Loved your take on the story.
Original and well done loved the building up of the story looking forward to more
Very nicely done. As others have already said this one needs another chapter or two!
Clever premise.
Decent buildup.
But the masturbation was too straightforward. Needed more dialog. What was he thinking about while he jerked off? Could he do it slower? Can he imagine titty fucking her? If so, would he like it if she took his cock into her mouth?
Four stars.
Ok, so that was really really fucking hot!!! If your intent was to make all of your readers masturbate and cum you have succeeded admirably. I doubt there's a dry hand in the house. 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦. Can't wait for part two. Hoping my cock will recover from this abuse. I have a feeling that's a strong yes! Thank you. Felt SO good!