All Comments on 'The Photo Shoot Ch. 02'

Great, imaging dad fucking, mom sitting on the face and both slapping her breasts , dad taking turns sucking mom's nipples and daughter's. Then reverse with mom on bottom. Love it.

Your writing keeps a reader from stopping.

I hope you are the woman you describe, If you are,

I know you are Drop Dead Gorgeous ...and it's the

same if dressed to the nines or shorts and a top.

I wrote "I hope you are the woman you describe"

as one writer on a web site posed as a female

from Asia who wrote about her lesbian girlfriends.

After this female impersonator confessed, I

realized how easy for someone to live a lie.

I do know female writers.. More than you wanted

to hear.

I do wish you well and hope you will continue

writing erotic stories as well as non erotic. I say

non-erotic as that is were an author can do well.

Sincerely, Richard O.usa

P.S. My vote is five stars.

This is not ment to cut down ch.1. But girl you out did yourself, this was one of the best reads yet. PLEASE don't stop writing stories like this......THANKS

A really great erotic read. Very hot sex scenes, graphically written to tease the reader, and my God it did that to me.

5*