by t0nst3rs
i just love this story! please keep writing!!! :D i hope there will be more chapters to this story.
I liked your story right from the 1st installment and it keeps getting better! Looking forward to the next chapters.
You actually submitted TWO chapters in one story this time! I'm so amazed by this ability! Imagine if you could submit the whole novella in one story... that would be MINDBLOWING!
Until you stop following the 50 story fad, you're getting zeroes from me.
really need to get a life. Come on, giving out zeroes because you don't like the fact that she writes the story in chapters? That's downright ridiculous. I think she does a great job and should be commended, not knocked.
That my story is written in chapters, then don't fucking read it. When you see it says chapter after the title, do us all a favor and skip over it. Its really fucking lame that you come on here and complain about that, and offer no feedback about the characters or plotline whatsoever.
Thus one has the makings to be a great storyline with many chapters! Looking forward to reading them all, as they are submitted. Thank you. O:-)
This is such a hot story and it's totally worth the wait. I do agree that the chapters are too short but omg the story is so hot it's worth it. Patience is a virtue :)