All Comments on 'The Pick-up'

Very enjoyable! I really wanted him to cum inside her. I hope they meet up again soon.

*****A real fun read sometimes you can tell when someone enjoys writing a story. I think you enjoyed writing this one. Thanks for sharing.

Very nice indeed...coming from the females perspective. We've all been there.

Thanks. I enjoyed the story setup and hope there is a follow up.

This is chapter one, right?

Cute tale. I had a gal back in college ask me out to dinner once, she picked me up in her car, took us to a nice place, reservations, the whole bit.

Did some dancing, some drinks, she took me home and sort of took the lead, if an attack can be called a "lead."

We had a lot of fun for several weeks, but when she realized it WAS just fun and I liked fun with lots of gals back then, she is the one that threw the dishes at me.

Something original! Congratulations and thanks. 4*

Very short and sweet, but hot! Where is this guy? I need him ! Thanx, Chrissy