All Comments on 'The Pickup'

Very hot! The stockings get me every time.

Damn! You took me by surprise. I was reading and already had the ending figured out, because I’ve read so many of these role playing stories where, in the end, in the afterglow of the fantastic sex, the husband and wife declare that they are going to have to do this again. The fact that she was actually picked up by someone who wasn’t her husband in character was hot. I’m hooked on your style! Thanks!

I love the bit at the end where she runs into someone whe knows.

Great story. Love the back & forth on how “ she” should dress. Good recovery on the lawyer/ court line. Didn’t think you were gonna bail on him while in the shower, then run into you know who🤣👍. Nice job

It was a bit Red Shoe Diaries, but I liked the twist in the end. The description of the sex was hot too.