All Comments on 'The Pickup Club'

I think you should have worn high heel pumps to the pickup club also. Can't see those thigh hi's lasting very long.

Good first story. Four stars.

That was hot.

A great first story. Keep them comming.

Thank you for taking the time to write and submit this story. I enjoyed the fact you had the pretty boy run off. The female variation was unexpected. Good on you. Whilst some readers are ruthless when stories are wrongly classified. Often the line is blurred and difficult to differentiate. I'm not sure how much guidance you can get from an anonymous reader claiming experience. Where is their account. Frankly I'd delete a comment that bullies in the way one or two of yours have.

Keep enjoying and writing.

Good story with an unexpected ending,

Great start. Keep them cumming

Yes every man's fantasy two women to watch and join in with, at least in theory. Its the writers story but it seems the wifes character is quite happy to play the lesbian Hotwife card. I can't help thinking in future stories the husband will get short changed.

I really enjoyed this story!! More please!

Great story! Loved the unexpected twist with the lesbian lover.

Lesbians are my favorite.

Love to see my wife and my sis in lesbian sex.

Nicely and creatively done !

nice...

I wanted so much more! Once they got home I wanted it to last all night!