by Secret_Passion2018
There is huge potential in this story however the grammar is appalling. Please either use an editor or read it out loud to yourself.
This story is...and I use the word 'Is', not 'was'...so hot it literally left me panting...panting in anticipation of more---more and better. But the ending should have been so much better! Instead of leaving us with a fine Scotch whiskey, instead you left us with butterscotch, and you chose to end without a cliffhanger, as I suspect you wanted to, but could not find one sufficient to meet your needs. What a shame!
YOMEYO