All Comments on 'The Picture of Elegance'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
VERY HOT

OMG you describe things in such detail write more plz! 5/5

lilmasterg125lilmasterg125about 17 years ago
amazing

as i said before these are some of the greatest stories i have read please continue wirting more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good job

This story as well as your other ones are very well written and convey a good sense of excitment and enthuasim. Good job. Please continue.

garyr19680garyr19680over 13 years ago
wow

Very sexy, I hope you continue the adventures of these two families.

dreamer_of_urgesdreamer_of_urgesabout 6 years ago
WOW...This was really some Sweet story telling

So far I've read each of your stories and this is the Hottest by far!

Please continue this story line, I want to see if Aunt Jean takes it in the ass! Also what else happens between these two families. You have a good mind and need to keep writing great stories like this.

Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 6 years ago
Two questions

Why the sudden switch to "Aunt" Jean, when he's called her Jean while fucking at her house? It just implies a familial relationship that does not exist.

How is a woman with two adult children lactating like she just dropped a pup? That's never been explained through the whole story arc.

I'd have liked to have seen the women 69 and suck creampies from each other's holes, after Nick fucked them both. The idea of Nick getting his face, then his dick into the action, while they tribbed each other, is all but physically impossible to pull off.

blackcockriderblackcockriderabout 2 years ago

5 + Stars for your stories, very hot, thanks. Love moms massive milky breasts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So good.

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Great addition to the series!

11/10 Biscotti!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So incredibly hot.

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