All Comments on 'The Pink Cat Ch. 03'

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fierycougarfierycougarover 4 years agoAuthor
Typos

I'll apologize now, folks. I ran my grammar check and STILL missed several typos. I'll do better next time. Still, I hope you enjoy Eisheth's adventure.

CybersleuthCybersleuthover 4 years ago
Excellent work

Typos do not distract from the storyline and the character development. I love that Eisheth is both strong and submissive at the same time. It shows what I believe to be true and that is that a submissive is very strong because she chooses to exchange her power. She trades willingly yet still retains the final word. She controls the safe word and it is her choice to use it or not. The Dom who ignores it is not worthy of the name and is merely an abuser.

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