All Comments on 'The Pirate King Ch. 20'

Well worth waiting for. Carefully assembling the story like collecting valuable pieces for a collection of fine china. The developing passion between the captain and his sailor exhibit and violence emotion worthy of the sea itself.

Please continue writing, the story deserves to reach a worthy conclusion.

Nakamook you do not let us down. As always loved it. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

You're spinning strands of magic into this web of yours again. Now it'll hold. Felt the power this time, and the sea. Saw it, smelled it, tasted it. You made me see and feel so much. And it's there for anyone, if they open the door. You channeled it right there. This was exquisite. Thank you.

Controlling the sea until that control carries with it the joining of two, unbelievable characters. Both kings. So hot.

What you say is so deeply true: "in the meantime we have the moon, and the stars, and all the ways in which those things are infinite and reflections of our own desires and mythologies and still maintain their own truths." Thank you. I've been reading these chapters in a period where my life and soul get uprooted and shredded and put back together again, flooded with hope and desire and despair and destruction in such potent waves. Your story helps me find the peace of the seas and the stars and the trees. Connecting with them is such a source of hope and relief and your story has backed me through it all