All Comments on 'The Place Pt. 04'

Good setup and lots of action, but there's no real story here. I read all four chapters, waiting for him to either wake in his own bed, or find out some reason behind the 'Place': how it came to be, how they came to be there, etc.

The best I can say is it's well written , but there's no foundation, no (I hate the word, but) no denouement. With that, my vote would have probably be higher.