All Comments on 'The Plant Pt. 02 - Spores'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well written but...........

Who is Margaret, where did she come from, why she helping and what is she? Loved the part about the conservationists protecting the plants that will destroy them. Also I am not a fan of anything that eliminates the human race.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love the story, it is well written, interesting and flows smoothly. There is just one thing that I find jarring. You continually refer to the plant'

s penises as "pustules". The correct term for the male plant part is "Stamen". On a female the reproductive organ is the "pistil". A pustule is a blister filled with waste from an infection. Sorry for harping on that, but it made me crazy, and a little grossed out, every time I read it.

dgfergiedgfergieover 2 years ago

Interesting story, reminds me of one of Heinlein's stories or maybe the Body Snatchers was the one. Good story and written well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really out of my league - but I will continue to the finish line. Great job, Author!

RanDog025RanDog0258 months ago

Another 5 BIG ONES!

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