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Click hereIt's simple in Iran -- we'd lose our heads. And here in New Zealand, sex between us is also illegal. Ursula and I floundered, dealing with the sorts of questions that must confront gay couples constantly.
"Is there anyone we can talk too?" I asked Ursula.
"Alexis, of course. That girl has more emotional intelligence than anyone I've met. And she's practical."
I haven't told Ursula about Alexis and I won't because Alexis too owns our secret. We phoned her in Sydney and were met with stunned laughter.
"Not you two as well? I've just had Pearl and Bernard on the phone. They want to hook up which is fine for them in Bangkok, but not so fine if they move to the UK. But they'll be okay because nobody could guess they are related. She's a pretty Asian, and Bernard is so ginger he belongs in a kilt."
"That's okay for them," I said. "But you say we look like twins. Sometime, somewhere, someone will make trouble for us."
"Well for God's sake, do something about it! Get a bit of disguise. Ursula can dye her hair. She'll turn out a smashing blonde," said Alexis. "Half of my cast in Heartache High got themselves nose jobs. If Ursula goes blonde, then maybe James' part of the camouflage deal, is getting his nose tweaked. Just don't do anything dumb like applying for a wedding certificate.
"But really, are you two in deep enough to do all this?" We babbled back down the phone to Alexis. Words like: "Of course." "Sure are." "You're kidding?"
"Then just get on with it. Love you both," said Alexis, and hung up on us.
Ursula snuggled up against me. "Looks like it could be all right. We evil twins should just dye our hair, pucker up and..."
"Go for it," I said finishing her sentence.
"Yes, Alexis makes sense. Changing ourselves a touch shouldn't be that big a big deal... Hey, did you ever watch that old Hollywood movie? Gentlemen Prefer Blondes? Do you think that's true??"
"It certainly can be, Ms Weisz. But only if the blonde is you."
"Mmmn, but it's a lovely morning," said Ursula, stretching herself like a kitten about to purr. "I've got a great thought. Now we've got the idea of my hair and your nose sorted -- let's take Starsky and Jinx for a spin down the beach."
"Sounds great," I said.
"But no need to hang back on Starsky perving at my ass. I've got the picture. You like it."
"Of course. But still, I'd prefer to check."
Underneath her outward reserve, Ursula is a tease. You'll have to love her.
xxxx
Ms Weisz and Mr Andrews would be pleased if you voted.
- COMMENTS
Davester3712 months agoI enjoyed reading this story a lot. Your plot is interesting, timely, clever, and engaging. The characters are delightful, complex, believable, and well-developed. Your setting is beautiful, detailed, and enticing. What’s not to like?
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoVERY nice, though I must admit that something had me concentrating on Alexis.
Maybe stretch it out into multiple series-es about each other character.
nighthawk22204about 1 year agoIt's truly a beautiful story, extremely well written, decidedly erotic enough to be a keeper, and fantastically creative. I think I read most of this once before but couldn't recall the ending so assuredly I never finished it before and now I am very happy that this time I did.
I will check out what else you've written here and hope they are all as delightful.
quandomover 1 year agoAuthorHi Anonymous. Thanks for interest and your thoughts on The Playboy Inheritance. The story started in my imagination with the Ursula/ torn jodphurs scene; and from there it was a matter of creating (I hoped) a tense, and interesting story of opposite types, leading to it. Written of course during Covid lockdown. .... Best, Quandom
Anonymousover 1 year agoYou are a good writer. This story was a lot of fun. I enjoyed the funeral scene and the social bickering. I also like the two against a sea of trouble aspect.
The lock down part was vivid, making me long to stay in a bungelow, at the farm, and to spend days riding horses, relaxing and cooking meals. The relationship between brother and sister felt natural and had humor mixed with lust. I really got into that.
I felt a bit of disconnect in the middle, when you went from Alexis to Ursula. You built up interest at the funeral in a normal narrative fashion, and at the end with being in lockdown with Ursula. Those parts were engaging and really worked, for me. The section in the middle was mostly exposition instead of narrative. Because of this it felt less intimate. The scope of the story required to be a short novel. Baring that, you could have cut down the step siblings to just Ursula, Andrews, the Thai and the Brit, add some dialogue in for the latter two, and start at the lock down. The funeral could be in flashback and been a bit more narrative to keep it short, while focusing more on the main drama.
I am NOT saying these things to be cruel. I am saying them to be constructive, because you are a talented storyteller and I was very invested in your story. They are just the thoughts that occured to be while reading, but even as it is, I will definitely read this story again, in the future.
Rancher46almost 2 years agoExcellent story, well written with great characters and a great storyline. 5/5
mrdata9770over 2 years ago(10/25/2021) Nicely done; an enjoyable read indeed. I can picture her fully dressed in equestrian garb, riding him and every so often using her crop on his thigh and he wincing and smiling all the way. 5 stars from me.
nighthawk22204over 2 years agoWery well written, even the punctuation was well done, and the story line was tremendous! Hope you are working on the followup to the Tokyo Olympics and reconnecting with Alexis. I am following your work and hope to be able to read more. Thanks for sharing.
auwingerover 2 years agoGreat story with lots of twists and turns, but still kept interesting by the story-teller. Well done. Now for Chapter Two!!
