All Comments on 'The Pleasure Cruise Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story!

I stumbled onto this chapter, and after reading it HAD to go back and read the first 2 chapters.

1 - Looking forward to the next one, and

2 - this is a week long cruise. No one will object if you add a few more chapters!

Good job with your story telling and writing skills (side shout out to your editor). It’s not just about putting Tab A into Slot B ... it’s setting up the personalities and getting to the actual hook-up that’s the REAL story. You do it well.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Superhot- and I’m loving the genuineness of the characters

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Update, February 9: I'm 5,600 words into a new story that I anticipate posting as a one-off. It'll be a long read, and I'm aiming for something both more emotional and more romantic than my usual oeuvre. I've learned a long time ago never to set deadlines for myself, but the w...

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