by Concerto_in_A
Really good I think it would be. Awesome for more. Nicely written like everything else of urs :-)
Thank you so much. You might also enjoy Five Bright Smiles which just hit the website last night as well as Homecoming which is hung up over some classification issues. We'll resolve those soon, I expect.
The storyline was very intelligently conceived & PERFECTLY crafted.
This story is totally my cup of tea, & then some. It is very very EROTIC! It is a sex story & a love story two-in-one.
Is this story also PORNOGRAPHIC? Let me put it this way: whereas it is INTENSELY EROTIC indeed, the sex scenes (which go on one after the other) are part of the story, they tell us a lot about the wife & the husband and the LOVE they have for one another. Yes, they are in love, whatever either of them does they do it for the other one!
Your story was FREE OF UNNECESSARY DETALS, which is one of the reasons why i said it was perfectly crafted.
THE WIFE IS A KEEPER! THE WIFE IS A KEEPER!
👍👍!