All Comments on 'The Pleasure Planet Pt. 02'

This is a great plot line so far. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Great story. I really liked both parts. I would suggest that you describe the physical traits of the girl and also the size of the penises invading her body.

I love it! But personally, I do NOT want to hear her parts described, or the size of the members. That gets SO trite and cliched. When I hear that she was 32 D and he was 9 inches long... I stop reading. Pert or thick or long? Fine. But still not necessary.

But here it was just silly.

I really enjoyed the Hellhound's point of view.

:)

Part three is pending and will be available to you guys soon. There are, as requested, more 'maulings by the hellhound' and some more detailed descriptions of the main characters. ^-^