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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
good story but would be better if ...

I love the basic story, but the psuedo sound effects are terrible and distracting from the story content, who needs to repeatedly hear "SMACK" "SMACK" "SLAP" "ONE" "TWO" AND SO ON AND SO ON !! Give that silliness up and you'll really have a classic, and probably more readers and feedback. To write a story this long and keep the readers interest is great, dont turn this into a comic book "SLAP" BAM Wham POW - Please ?

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I enjoy writing erotic fiction and creating digital art in Poser. My ongoing project consists of a series of interconnected erotic discipline novels that I have illustrated with Poser images. My complete collection of fiction and images can be found at EC's Erotic Art & Fi...

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