The Ponytail Express Ch. 04

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Fred nodded. "She's probably not going to come gently."

Deb arched an eyebrow again. "Apparently few women do when you're around."

Fred advanced on his sexy girlfriend. "Nice innuendo joke. Am I rubbing off on you, Deb?"

Deb advanced on him. "Only one way to find out for sure." Fred's shorts suddenly became uncomfortable.

He met her lips with his own as his hands sought out her incredible curves. His tongue invaded her mouth and she sucked on it. He felt her arms around him, exploring his body. Fred palmed her lovely ass, crushing her against him as he sunk his hand into the taut flesh. Deb moaned softly into his mouth. His other hand traveled under her shirt, feeling the tightness of her belly on the way to grope a pert breast. Suddenly, she pulled away from him. He licked her minty saliva off his lips and chin.

She looked like she was waiting for something, and Fred suddenly knew.

"Terminal." He waited.

"Cupcake." She responded.

She pushed him hard onto the bed, shucking her clothes quickly, crawling seductively onto him. Deb immediately sought his hard cock and begin kissing his shaft while caressing it with her hand, admiring the shape. She laughed as Fred maneuvered her into a sixty-nine. Her laughter turned to coos of desire as he began to eat her. Deb's mouth closed over his dick; her tongue began working his shaft; he tasted like a vanilla latte. She hummed into him as she felt Fred's tongue continue his assault on her sex.

"That's it, Freddy. Oh Freddy!" She ground her pussy onto her lover as she slurped around his cock. She felt like she was going crazy.

"Terminal," Deb moaned around his glans as she humped Fred's face. Her eyelids fluttered. Freddy added a third finger, sawing into her while he licked her folds.

"Cupcake," He mouthed, barely coherent, his mouth full of pussy.

Deb rolled his testicles around in her mouth while her hand pumped his shaft. Fred was calling her name between grunts. His cock didn't taste as good as it had.

"Terminal cupcake!" And there it was; smell and taste, a medley of him, on her lips. As Deb continued fellating her lover, she felt his tongue lapping insistently around her asshole as his fingers continued to saw into her sopping pussy.

"Eat my fucking ass!" Was what she was trying to say, but her mouth was full of cock, so it was just a muffled mess. Her hips bucked, then convulsed. She felt Fred's balls tighten and was gifted with a gush of Freddy's baby batter. She gulped it down like a smoothy. It was the first time she'd ever swallowed semen. It smelled sharply of sandalwood but tasted like vanilla; she wished there was more of it.

They maneuvered into a clumsy kiss, still reeling from their orgasms. Fred pulled away, licking spittle and cum off his lips. He gazed into Deb's lust-filled eyes. He had one hand on the back of her neck, the other on his wet, still-hard cock. He was rubbing it against her vulva, sending waves of pleasure rippling across her body.

"You know what I'm going to do now Deb?"

They were eye to eye. He on top, erection slick with her juices as he flicked his glans over her glistening folds. Deb lay below, still awash from her orgasm, legs spread invitingly, hips slightly raised in anticipation. Deb and Fred were locked eye to eye, glistening with sweat.

Before Fred could react, she grabbed his ass with both hands, pulling him into her, balls deep. Her back arched, breasts shuddering across her chest, her right leg spasmed.

"mmmm, soooo fucking goooood is what you're going to do F-freddy," She whimpered.

Fred stifled a yell with clenched teeth as he sank into her frothy depths. When he pulled out, he could feel her try to suck him back in. He'd never felt the sensation before and never wanted it to end. He trip hammered into her again and again.

"Fffreddy say the fucking thing," Deb garbled, as she fucked herself into Freddy with abandon. He drove into her twice more as their hips kissed with audible slaps. Her breasts shook with each thrust. Fred couldn't tell if it was sweat or tears, but it definitely stoked his fire.

"Terminal." Slap. "Cupcake." Slap! Freddy kept repeating the phrase. His release was approaching like a freight train. He tried to focus on Deb's tattoo, noting how it contrasted with her skin, her quivering breasts almost made it look like the flowers were blowing in the wind. He hammered into her again, and she called out his name. He lowered himself down, kissing her earlobe while making a series of quick, circular thrusts as he deep dicked her. Deb's eyes had been squeezed shut, but they widened rapturously while she hissed his name again. She held him, hand on his ass, one in his hair. Her legs wrapped deliciously around his back, encouraging him to thrust harder. Fred somehow managed coherence, his teeth holding Deb's earlobe hostage as he drove his cock deep into her sopping furrow.

"I'm yours." Sweat dripped off his face, stinging his eyes.

"Yeah?" She nodded. Her hips insisted Fred increase the pace. He was more than happy to oblige.

"Deb!" He gyrated his hips for all he was worth.

"Mine." Deb repeated the word like a mantra with each thrust. Finally, Fred came hard into her. His head and chest raised up, his mouth agape as his cock pulsed its molten load into her core. Deb's strong legs held Fred in place, hips raised off the bed, glutes clenched as she milked her man. She rolled her abdomen as she felt his seed filling her. Deb quaked in the throes of another orgasm. Fred whimpered, holding on to the small of her back like a man in a hurricane. The other had a handful of supple breast, his thumb teasing her nipple.

Fred listed to the side onto the bed, spent. Deb crawled on top of him, a magnificent sweaty vision of lust. What little mascara she had ran in narrow rivulets off her delicate cheekbones. She grinned like a Cheshire cat over Fred, who was trying to catch his breath. She took his hands in hers, putting them on her sweaty, heaving breasts.

"Let's shoot for 10, stud." Not for the last time, Fred felt out of his depth.

"Yep," He agreed.

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SniperkingSniperkingabout 2 years ago

"Despite what transpired earlier in the day, she couldn't get over how she felt. It would be easy to say she was influenced by the scent, but here she was, immune, and she still wanted Freddy. He was patient, kind, and being able to give her multiple orgasms had absolutely nothing to do with it. The last and most important fact was that at any time, Freddy could make her into a sex slave but chose not to. She didn't know many people with that kind of restraint."

I mean she already knew he was most of those things before the scent, that's why they were friends. But they didn't go out cause he wasn't her type. And the orgasm thing has to definitely be due to the scent. Cause I'm pretty sure he's a virgin right? The only slightly plausible explanation for her being attracted to him now without the scent would maybe be the fact that he didn't turn her into a slave, but even that's a stretch. It sounds super unlikely that just would make her attracted to him. But then again this is fiction. If your going for the she still likes him without the MC then more thought should have been put into it and maybe have it happen gradually. Like him becoming more assertive or something. Again it's fiction yes, but some realism helps to keep readers immersed. You can only suspend disbelief so much, and inconsistencies are just bad.

SniperkingSniperkingabout 2 years ago

Basically, they should just stop pretending and just accept what they are.

SniperkingSniperkingabout 2 years ago

This chapter was better than the last. Fred's reasoning for not wanting to use his powers is still weirdly annoying to me in the sense that it doesn't line up with his actions. He says he doesn't want to use anyone but what about what he did to his professor and his classmate. He hasn't shown any remorse or frankly even thought about it and I think that's a clear example of just using them. Wish he would be consistent.

Also the Deb situation is false right? She wouldn't like him without the scent, why else would she be okay with him being with other girls? Cause if it isn't then that doesn't line up with her introduction at the start. She wants someone dominant/outgoing or whatever she meant by a driver. But Fred is still not that, he's actually weirdly submissive to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I don't think this count as male dominant cause Fred position clearly under Deb, at least when he said he is deb.

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