All Comments on 'The Pool Ch. 02'

Maybe next chapter the brothers can DP sis. She wants it.

The next chapter is a work in progress with maybe a surprise or two !!

At least two more chapters coming, I see. Still another brother to enjoy, then there's dad. Maybe mom, too?

I like it. Looking at a picture of my gorgeous step brother right now. I love day dreaming.

Debbie

Xxxxx

Despite the nay-sayers, you are doing well. Yes this is a common theme for this type of story, your writing is well done. I personally would love to see a bit more history between her and her brothers. Who has she felt close to? Who had her heart before the sex?

But that just me. Keep going... keep reading... you'll get better as you gain your confidence and looks that's starting to happen so try not to let the negative people get you down.

This is really a comment on all of luckylucies stories to date If the negative writers of comments were to read all four of her stories in order, they would see that each one is better than the last and with the promise of more to CUM I can't wait to see how she involves the rest of her family.

I've just read my comment on Lovelylucies stories and realise I owe her an apology.

I called her Luckylucie, that might make some of you think I hadn't read her stories.

My sincere apologies on a typo error, keep up the good work. BJ

Thanks to everyone for the comments given - it really is an encouragement to continue to write more. I only hope I can improve and you all enjoy reading whatever I do write x

I loved it so fucking hot.