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Anonymousalmost 4 years agoFantastic!
Very, erotic, slow build. I think believable too. Will there be a part 2? I surely hope so.
Reggie2xxalmost 4 years agoLike the story but damn I needed it to got at least a little more this time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agopick a tense
don't keep switching from past to present, sometimes even in the same sentence.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoPretty Damn Hot considering that there was no sex. Looking forward to it continuing. cp
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoVery well written. Very hot, exciting and intense. Great build up, really anxious to read the next chapter
Anonymousover 3 years agoJust to add a bit...
Very good story. Just to add a bit more realism you should have added that Jamie/Brent had to get a quick STD test too. (not that i would know anything about that...LOL)
Anonymousabout 3 years agoTbh Jaimie is pretty unlikable, I can see why his parents don't wanna talk to him lmao
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brycemanning@brycemanningThanks to everyone here who's read, rated, and commented on my stories. I have another 200+ pages of material I've been working on, though my perfectionist streak can leave me slow to start publishing a new series. Hang in there! I'm 30 (as of this mention) and prefer to writ...
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