All Comments on 'The Pornstar's Girlfriend Ch. 09'

That was just beautiful...sniff...sniff

I lol in d labour scene. Very funny. Nice ending bizzy.

Five stars*****

The final chapter of the series was my introduction to the story, and to your writing. I was intrigued so I decided to start from the beginning and read all of the other chapters. I have now discovered a new favourite author to add to my bookmark list. I also have lots more of your work to read.

Excellent work Bizzy_Bish! The series is highly erotic at times but the characters are convincing, and very human. It caught my attention at many levels. I consider that the sign of good fiction writing, regardless of the genre.

fab, girl, just fab.

I know how much effort goes into writing. You do it so well !!!

Beautiful!!!!!

Finally, one of those occasions when a properly structured story comes along and actually gets finished! Chapters straight and to-the-point. To be continued actually taking place, despite a break, none of this 'to be continued' 10 years ago never being heard of again. Also a sensible and well thought of ending which we were always unsure of, not one of these 20 year jumps to a sudden - as well as impossible - finishes. 30 lines from the finish, I flipped a coin to decide what I thought she'd say! Congrats:-)

This shit was written too fast.

NICE!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥